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Old 12-22-2018, 03:05 PM
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Old 12-22-2018, 03:06 PM
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Started on your novel yet?
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Come on, I want read how you would have done it
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You could at least shorten it so it's not a novel? Hahah
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I sort of forgot precisely what the question was now.

Ask again? LOL.
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I asked how would you have written LP like Ephraim/Amy?
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And you said it would take an novel for you to reply
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Season 1, two kisses with emotional/romantic connection there from the start. But no romantic relationship. Growing to best friends but always with emotional/romantic sparks/energy.

Season 2, Amy has depression (due to loved one dying) which prevented them from being together. They ended up dating other people but they were meaningless relationships. But we got a lot of romantic jealousy.

They finally get together at the end of season 2/beginning of season 3. Feels totally right. They sleep together for the first time middle of season 3. Amy was a virgin. SPECTACULAR MOMENT. Best I’ve ever seen.

They ended up breaking up late season 3 due to something unrelated to them. They proved in spades they worked romantically. They had to break up due to this other unrelated thing. It was on Ephram’s end. He ended up bailing and going to Europe for the summer. He returns wanting Amy back. They still love each other but Amy tells him she was very hurt and it took forever not to cry every two seconds, and has to protect herself. So they go back into best friendship mode with romantic sparks still everywhere. So many beautiful moments. They do slip up and end up sleeping together. But Amy pulls back still. It is revealed Ephram wrote her a postcard every day he was in Europe but didn’t send them. He gave them to her that night.

They finally reunite at the end of season four in the series finale. Best I’ve ever seen!

If you end up inserting Peyton for Amy it totally works. Especially the depression over loved one passing, also having difficulty trusting. Amy and Peyton have a lot in common. Lucas and Ephram have similarities too... soft spoken artistic inteliectuals.

I’m telling you... you’d LOVE Ephram and Amy.

PS: I missed explaining so much about Ephram/Amy. They are so beautiful!

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Okay, how would you have written LP that way? Because that's what I was asking haha
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Basically the same way... use Peyton’s depression over loss as delays, as well as trust issues. Let Leyton have moments but delay their romantic relationship a couple/few seasons. Let something break them up temporarily but not a triangle. Keep emotional/romantic connection. Have Peyton a virgin when she first sleeps with Lucas. I so love the fact that Amy was never with anyone but Ephram. She had other relationships but never slept with any other guy but Ephram. That is so special!

Anyway, no triangles, keep the connection going no matter the state of their relationship, use depression and trust issues for Peyton, Lucas having sensitivity the entire way through. Let them officially get together in seasons three or four, temporary break up maybe during college years but have them staying in contact regardless. Let them reunite, then we get to see marriage and kids with time to spare.
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Season 1, two kisses with emotional/romantic connection there from the start. But no romantic relationship. Growing to best friends but always with emotional/romantic sparks/energy.

Season 2, Amy has depression (due to loved one dying) which prevented them from being together. They ended up dating other people but they were meaningless relationships. But we got a lot of romantic jealousy.

They finally get together at the end of season 2/beginning of season 3. Feels totally right. They sleep together for the first time middle of season 3. Amy was a virgin. SPECTACULAR MOMENT. Best I’ve ever seen.

They ended up breaking up late season 3 due to something unrelated to them. They proved in spades they worked romantically. They had to break up due to this other unrelated thing. It was on Ephram’s end. He ended up bailing and going to Europe for the summer. He returns wanting Amy back. They still love each other but Amy tells him she was very hurt and it took forever not to cry every two seconds, and has to protect herself. So they go back into best friendship mode with romantic sparks still everywhere. So many beautiful moments. They do slip up and end up sleeping together. But Amy pulls back still. It is revealed Ephram wrote her a postcard every day he was in Europe but didn’t send them. He gave them to her that night.

They finally reunite at the end of season four in the series finale. Best I’ve ever seen!

If you end up inserting Peyton for Amy it totally works. Especially the depression over loved one passing, also having difficulty trusting. Amy and Peyton have a lot in common. Lucas and Ephram have similarities too... soft spoken artistic inteliectuals.

I’m telling you... you’d LOVE Ephram and Amy.

PS: I missed explaining so much about Ephram/Amy. They are so beautiful!
Superb summary of Ephram/Amy, Michelle!! I miss them.
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Basically the same way... use Peyton’s depression over loss as delays, as well as trust issues. Let Leyton have moments but delay their romantic relationship a couple/few seasons. Let something break them up temporarily but not a triangle. Keep emotional/romantic connection. Have Peyton a virgin when she first sleeps with Lucas. I so love the fact that Amy was never with anyone but Ephram. She had other relationships but never slept with any other guy but Ephram. That is so special!

Anyway, no triangles, keep the connection going no matter the state of their relationship, use depression and trust issues for Peyton, Lucas having sensitivity the entire way through. Let them officially get together in seasons three or four, temporary break up maybe during college years but have them staying in contact regardless. Let them reunite, then we get to see marriage and kids with time to spare.
The only thing different is that Leyton would not have a beautiful Cabin scene season three due to Peyton definitely not being a virgin.
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